By: Hasani and Brigette

The poem Didactic Elegy came from a book Angel of Yaw. The book mainly talks about two struggling forces grief, and instruction. When we looked up what the title meant and broke it down into pieces it resembled types of literature demonstrated in art intended for instruction. It’s a poem intended to teach a moral lesson in this case (elegy) expressing sorrow in poem, or musical composition.
This poem opens up saying “intention draws a bold, black line across an otherwise white field”. This is him staring to draw his masterpiece. Saying that the eye holds the relevance what you see is what’s really happening. No one can make something that happened on September 11th up. It later states it’s easy to apply a continuous black mark on to a primed canvas. We feel it means that they had all that they needed to know on how to blow up the twin towers. With our help that they were able to know what kind of force and where they would need to hit the twin towers for them to go down. This is also true in art that if something’s already primed it’s easy to smear the lines. But it’s difficult to see what you’re going to add next to a painting without ruining what’s already there.
So why is that artwork showing death, but sets across a message is “charged with negativity”. Why is it not the subjects, but the object or in this case the bigger message that’s negative, why isn’t it the subjects who did it? The art in this is not only what the buildings stood for but also what it endured, how the crash of September is the “radical reevaluations [is the] masterpiece.” Not only was it the second time it happened but they also made sure to hit both of the towers to make sure the work of art is enduring all that is capable, otherwise it would be an unfinished masterpiece.
Why does the critic feel guilty to view this like a masterpiece? Yes it’s negative but when we think of masterpiece we think about not only the act but everything you needed to prepare to make it all come together. To make sure everything blends in well to make sure that your final piece is what you wanted. Otherwise then the artwork will be assigned a different value than what you intended. Why is it that you have to realize what you had, when its gone?
Can you imagine something even if it didn’t happen? When you think of the twin towers what do you think of first the event of the towers standing, or the events image of them collapsing? The eye of the beholder will tell you who were the hero’s? Should they be considered heros even if it wasn’t their choice to be in that situation? If they are heroes to you for going through what they had to endure, then why did they make that choice to jump out of the window? Why do heroes have to be the victims willing to risk their life to save someone else? The firemen, police, traffic guards, everyone trying to get the people to safety, they are the heroes but why should they go through such lengths to show what their capable of?
This is a picture and a link of one of the victims taking life into his own hands and jumping out the window with no regret.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Falling_Man
Unless to be an American means to embrace one’s death. That’s what the president said, is this why we got attacked, look at who was leading our country at the time of war.
This is the clip of the president’s reaction to when he heard the news. (Scroll down and observe the picture of him reading with the kid)
http://whatreallyhappened.com/WRHARTICLES/schoolvideo.html?q=schoolvideo.html
The first line is the starting point like his thesis statement. But then he reuses it two more times changing to meaning but also allowing you to finish the sentence. Showing you where he begins, but also leading you to the beginning is also where it ends. The poem allows him to ask questions, but also lets him tell the reader what’s the right answer. He repeats pieces of a line and reuses them to show a different meaning. Or he uses his word in the definition that he’s trying to explain to you, “The mere appearance of significance is significant.” He also repeats the epigraph on the first page “sense that sees itself is spirit”. He later restates it replacing " sense” and “ignorance”, and “spirit” and “elegy.”
This is further explanation of the elegy.
http://jacketmagazine.com/37/stone-freeman-re-lerner.shtml
Take precaution when viewing this, this is the video if the twin towers collapse.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qddt-_zu4D0
Questions to consider:
Why did you think the author used the title “Didactic Elegy”?
Why do you think the author uses the Greeks to demonstrate meaninglessness, beauty, death and heroic?
Who do you think the author is referring to when uses “critic” and why does he refers to the critic as a “she”?
What does it takes to be a hero? Who do you consider to be a hero and does the same image appears when you think about that person?
Did the people in the twin towers have an option to live or die and should they be considered as heroes?
What was your first reaction of September 11, 2001 and do you have any heroic remembrance of that day?
Can September 11, 2001 event be considered a masterpiece? If so then to whom?
How can people mourn by themselves when the media makes them relive the tragedy over and over again?
What is the first thing you visualize when the twin towers is mention? Should we remember the towers standing or the towers collapse?